Talk:Cola Song/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:56, 9 December 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  15:56, 9 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Checking against the GA criteria edit

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    "and the appearance of J Balvin to that of " - unlink J Balvin here as it's already been linked
    "Commercially, the single experienced commercial success in Europe" - remove commercial as it's repetition
    " The recording was released through Atlantic Records on 15 April 2014" - overlink
    "The clip opens with Inna walking in bikini" - The clip opens with Inna walking in a bikini
    " Subsequently, the singer is portrayed performing a synchronized choreography with two fellow background dancers while wearing a white body suit" - add Subsequently, Inna is portrayed performing a synchronized choreography as I thought you were still talking about J Balvin!
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    No original research found.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Excellent work with this one! Will leave on hold until all of the minor issues are addressed.   JAGUAR  11:06, 11 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

@Jaguar: All done! THANK you very much; Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:29, 11 December 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! By all means, let's promote this.   JAGUAR  11:29, 11 December 2016 (UTC)Reply