Talk:Closure (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 17:02, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• Use En dash (–) between "another truth" and "that his"

Plot

• Likewise with lead, use en dash between "Amber" and "without".

Writing

• "the episode was "very much a Cigarette-Smoking Man episode" ", try to be consistent here; does Cigarette-Smoking need a hyphen or not?

Filming

• "The air force base was renamed April Air Force Base because the producers could not use the name March Air Force Base", is there a given reason for this?

Reception

• "...making it the eighth most watched episode that week", on all channels? Or on Sky1 specifically? 'Most watched episode' can be corrected to 'Most watched show/program' whatever floats your boat.
• "The episode received mostly positive reviews."...."Not all reviews were so positive.", eh? Bit inconsistent. I suggest removing the latter sentence and starting with "However, Rich Rosell from..." -- Lemonade51 (talk) 17:03, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

OK, I believe I've addressed all the concerns.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:25, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

Shall pass, nice work. – Lemonade51 (talk) 16:40, 4 April 2012 (UTC)