Talk:Christine Nelson/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Try shrinking the lead to three paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH.
• Remove the comma after "first episode of Degrassi Junior High"
• It's Late → "It's Late" (all uses)
• That's about it here.
  • All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:24, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Concept and casting

• Is the hyphen necessary between "provocatively-dressed"?
• "Of the filming" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "Of" to "On" or "During".
  • All fixed - I've made it "Speaking of the filming". to make it more clear. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:26, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Characterization

• "father may had" → "father may have"
  • Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:27, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Role in Degrassi

• Except for the one in #The_Next_Generation, are the TV screenshots needed?
• Remove the comma after "were a baby".
• There's a word missing between "by parents".
• "withhold a payment" → "withhold payment"
• Is "day care" two words in British English?
• "which Spike responds" → "to which Spike responds"
  • All fixed. I also just put "daycare" as one word. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Novelization

• "based from" doesn't sound right.
• Remove the comma after "support her daughter".
  • Both fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Reception and impact

• "story line" → "storyline" (all uses)
• "14 year-old" → "14-year-old"
• Remove the comma after "pregnant in real life".
• "for the Planned Parenthood" → "for Planned Parenthood"
  • All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

References

• The main sections #Episodes and #Sources do not seem necessary. I would merge them all here into subsections as:

==References==

===Citations===

===Episodes===

===Sources===

Done. I didn't think of making subsections! ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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