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In responding to Aja Leafe's article on ceramic houses my first impression was that the article, being about construction practices, could use more pictures to illustrate concepts easily represented visually. The introduction to the piece does do well in outlining the subject's main points. I feel that the introduction would be even more explanatory by going into greater detail about how the house is physically constructed. Though this information does appear later in the article a short synopsis of it would be helpful in visualizing the construction more clearly from the start. A good point was brought up in the introduction that I would have liked to see followed up on more in the body of the document. This is referring to the earthquake resistance of the structure. How is it earthquake resistant and why? Has houses been through earthquakes? How big where they and how did the houses fair? I am particularly interested in this, because I am from earthquake country and like to be informed about the structural soundness of varies construction methods. Overall an informative and engaging article. Retrieved from "http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Sia82" sierra —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sia82 (talk • contribs)