Talk:Brimington Junior School

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Victuallers in topic Unsuitable tense tag

Victuallers 18:05, 3 March 2007 (UTC)Reply

Unsuitable tense tag

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This article suffers from being written as a recollection, written in a past tense unsuitable for an encyclopedia. In particular, sentences such as "Its current headmaster was or still is Mr. Brian Dumbar" are not appropriate, as they create doubt. Bob talk 09:17, 23 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

Agreed this is a good length but somtimes wanders into less interesting areas. Go on Bob .... see if you can do better ..Victuallers 18:05, 3 March 2007 (UTC)Reply