Talk:Boston Mills/Brandywine Ski Resorts

Wiki Education assignment: WRIT 1150-26, Writing for Others

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2023 and 11 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Simplylil (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Simplylil (talk) 13:23, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

Intended Edits

I am planning on making some edits to the article in the coming weeks, and the following is a big picture of my proposed edits. First, I plan on adding to the lead section to bring it more closely in line with Wikipedia's criteria of providing an overview of the entire article. In the "History" section, I plan to expand on the recent updates of the ski resorts' transfer of ownership, especially during the period of the Covid-19 pandemic. Additionally, to enhance the organization and balance of the article, I plan on adding several sections- tentatively being "Geography" and "Lawsuits." Also, I would move some information around and create subsections under the "Features" section to differentiate the Boston Mills and Brandywine resorts. Furthermore, I plan on adding visuals to the article and improving the readability of the lift and trail data by putting them in tables. Overall, I will try to find sources to support all currently uncited information, but I will also be removing information that simply do not have verifiability. I will also edit or remove information that is irrelevant to the Boston Mills and Brandywine Ski Resorts as well as weasel words to maintain neutrality. Feel free to check out my annotated bibliography in the Wikipedia dashboard sandbox. Simplylil (talk) 14:03, 15 November 2023 (UTC)