Talk:Boroqul/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: PizzaKing13 (talk · contribs) 20:50, 25 May 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this article. 20:50, 25 May 2023 (UTC)

Infobox

• List his birth year of c. 1162 in the infobox

• Done

Lead

• Is there a translation of Boroqul's name in the traditional Mongolian script? Russian Wikipedia says ᠪᠥᠷᠥᠬᠦᠯ while Chinese and Korean Wikipedia say ᠪᠦᠷᠭᠦᠳ Does any source verify?

• Not that I can find, sadly.

• Remove the comma after "inner council"

• Done

Life and career

• Remove the comma after "Börte"
• "The Secret History of the Mongols" → "[[The Secret History of the Mongols]]"
• Mention what The Secret History of the Mongols is
• Remove the comma after "Jurkin tribe"
• Who was Jebe?
• Italicize Jami' al-tawarikh
• 1217-18 → 1217–18 (endash)

• All done.

References

• All sources look good

Overall

• Single image is good. I assume no free images (if at all) of Boroqul exist

• That is sadly correct.

• Move the image to the right side so that Ögedei "faces the text" if you get what I mean

• Done.

• Stable
• No war edits
• Focused on topic

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

@AirshipJungleman29: I've left some comments for the review. PizzaKing13 ^¡Hablame! 22:59, 25 May 2023 (UTC)

• PizzaKing13 I've responded to all your comments. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 09:00, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
  • @AirshipJungleman29: All looks good to me. I'll pass this review. PizzaKing13 ^¡Hablame! 09:05, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

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