Talk:Black Terror (ship)/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:19, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "attempting ... made two attempts..." repetitive.
- Rephrased
- "in 1862. In early 1863" likewise.
- Rephrased
- Link Union Navy.
- Linked
- "less than $9.00 and" no need for the cents, and suggest you inflate this figure (with an appropriate level of precision).
- Done, and inflated
- "the Anaconda plan was" plan or Plan?
- Standardized with Anaconda Plan
- "still in Confederate hands" still controlled by the Confederates.
- Done
- "Thomas General " don't you mean Thomas Williams?
- Yes, fixed (apparently I slipped up trying to make the piped link)
- "of ironclads led " link here in the body.
- Linked
- "by intentionally grounded" grounding?
- Corrected to "intentional grounding"
- "tell Porter.[16][15]" ref order.
- Swapped
- "coal barge[19][16] and" similar.
- Swapped.
- "either $8.23[19][23] or $8.63[17][24] " inflate.
- Done
- "officer Wirt Adams stated" William Wirt Adams.
- Changed the link, although "Wirt Adams" is probably just as common as "William Wirt Adams"
- "about a 1 mile" no need for "a".
- Removed
- "Indianola occurred in" took place
- Done
- Note [a] needs a full stop.
- Added
- "Smith, Myron" ref has some odd italic issues.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:49, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: - Thanks for the review! All done except for the italics issue, which is intentional with how ship names are presented. Hog Farm Talk 17:24, 14 September 2021 (UTC)