Talk:Battle of Sourton Down/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:07, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:

• in the lead, suggest "They routed the much larger Royalist army"
• "the carriages for his artillery waswere sent away"
• in the lead and at first mention in the body, link counter-attack and ambush
• in the lead, suggest "Chudleigh called for reinforcements from his infantry in Okehampton"
• French cCatholic princess
• "Charles I's father, King James I, had found himself" as this is in the past
• link Parliament of England
• commanded by the Earl of Essex
• link Nottingham
• and the Marquess of Hertford
• "From theirthere Hopton and Hertford"
• drop the comma from "Barnstaple, in north Devon"
• link West Country
• be consistent in hyphenating counter-attack (or not)
• "Captain Christpher " is this the right spelling?
• be consistent with the hyphenation of compass directions southwest vs south-west etc
• Earwig indicates no concerns about copyvio

That's all I have, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:02, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

@Peacemaker67: Thanks for the prompt review! I think I have addressed each point. A few embarrassing ones in there, I need to be more thorough in my self copy-editing, clearly. Hoping to get my hands on some local sources before bringing this to an A-class review. Harrias ^talk 13:31, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

No worries, a pleasure. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:19, 1 September 2019 (UTC)