Talk:Battle of Pusan Perimeter logistics/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Hawkeye7 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:56, 2 December 2010 (UTC)
Logistics at the Battle of Pusan Perimeter links to 10 different disambiguation pages:
Comments
- In the intro, or somewhere, can you defined ROK for readers who may not be familiar with the abbreviation?
- The background section is okay, but could focus more on logistical issues
- Could you add something about the preparation and movement of the 2nd Division from Fort Lewis to Pusan?
- The paragraph in "Challenges" on food is good. Could you include one on ammunition too?
- And something about tanks?
- "General Earle E. Partridge" should be "Major General Earle E. Partridge"
- Could you add a section on medical support?
- I've been looking around and I can't find a lot of info on medical equipment movement in my sources. —Ed!(talk) 19:46, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
- Health care support is an aspect of military logistics. I was expecting you to reach for the medical volumes. I'm going to wave it past for now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:47, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
- I've been looking around and I can't find a lot of info on medical equipment movement in my sources. —Ed!(talk) 19:46, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
- "Still, the inefficiency of North Korean logistics" Since this does not contradict the previous paragraph, suggest deleting "Still"
Good article! Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:07, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
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