 | This article has not yet been rated on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||
| |||||||||||
 | A member of the Guild of Copy Editors, Miniapolis, reviewed a version of this article for copy editing on 30 November 2020. However, a major copy edit was inappropriate at that time because of the issues specified below, or the other tags now found on this article. Once these issues have been addressed, and any related tags have been cleared, please tag the article once again for {{copyedit}}. The Guild welcomes all editors with a good grasp of English. Visit our project page if you are interested in joining! Please address the following issues as well as any other cleanup tags before re-tagging this article with copyedit: Translation too rough to copyedit. |
Grammar edit
The grammar needs a whole lot of fixing. Some are actually hard to understand. Givemedonuts (talk) 00:57, 20 October 2020 (UTC)