Talk:At This Moment

Latest comment: 6 years ago by 75.141.36.2 in topic Rewrite

Rewrite

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Paragraphs 3 and 4 are a retelling of the same story. I'd rewrite it, but I doubt I could make them sound like they fit together. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.141.36.2 (talk) 18:48, 16 January 2018 (UTC)Reply