Talk:Aslan's Country

Commentary section

I am personally opposed to the idea of having a separate commentary section in this article. Please leave any comments you have beneath here. Bornagain4 23:09, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

Well, I didn't want to put it in the introductor para because it contains spoilers. I figure that, since most Narnia articles have Commentary sections, this should too, albeit short. But if you can think of a different place to put it – for example, after the spoiler but still before the TOC – that's okay. --Fbv65edel / ☑t / ☛c || 20:35, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

We probably need a better section title than commentary. We started using that about a year ago to get commentary out of the synopsis. In the character articles I'm suggesting putting some of the commentary in Christian elements and the part that obviously doesn't go there in Background and developement. But that is mostly for lack of a better idea. LloydSommerer 03:09, 8 August 2006 (UTC)

I like it. Bornagain4 21:53, 8 August 2006 (UTC)

"...where good Narnians go..." Definately needs to be changed...but I'm afraid I can't think of the appropriate wording. A little help here? --Tim4christ17 01:28, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

I gave it a shot. I couldn't think of anything better, so I found the references in the books and went with that. LloydSommerer 02:21, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

Hey, it looks good. Bornagain4 02:29, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

Congratulations, that is a good Article —Preceding unsigned comment added by Lukser (talk • contribs) 14:32, 25 February 2008 (UTC)