Talk:Ariwara no Narihira/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review

GA Review

edit

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:12, 24 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:12, 24 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

General
Lead
Birth and ancestry
Romantic affairs
  • You should add the names of one or a few of each of these parties of speculators you mention in the 2nd para. Presently "it has been" sounds vague on this.
    • Given the specualtion took place over many cneturies, that would be difficult. The sources used in the article don't name them, and hunting them down in mediaeval texts may constitute OR or SYNTH.
Poetry

Thanks for the changes. The prose is excellent, I await you response to one last comment. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:20, 25 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the clarification. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:05, 26 June 2016 (UTC)Reply