Talk:Anushka Sharma/GA2

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Reviewer: FrB.TG (talk · contribs) 16:18, 9 September 2015 (UTC)

Comments coming tomorrow. -- Frankie _talk 16:18, 9 September 2015 (UTC)

Lead

• "Along with her brother, Sharma co-founded the production company Clean Slate Films in 2014. They made their production debut with the successful crime thriller NH10 (2015), with Sharma portraying the lead character." → "In 2014, Sharma, along with her brother, co-founded the production company Clean Slate Films, whose first release was the crime thriller NH10 (2015), with Sharma portraying the lead."
• "In addition to acting in films, Sharma is an ambassador for multiple brands"

Early life and modelling career

• De-link Mumbai, as WP:OVERLINKING advises against linking well-known geographies.

Acting career

• "Sharma's first acting role" → acting debut
• "emerging as the second-highest grossing Hindi film of that year" – pipe second-highest ... that year to List of Bollywood films of 2008.
• "It earned her a nomination for the Filmfare Award for Best Actress" – add her Filmfare debut nomination, too.
• "After an absence of nearly two years from the screen, Sharma portrayed the role of"
• "for "hold[ing] her own" against Aamir Khan" as in this para there is only mention of this Khan.
• "Critical reviews on the film were mixed;[48] writing ... writing that "she fills the stage" – two uses of the word "writing".
• Add some more info on Dil Dhadakne Do.

Personal life and screen work

• "Sharma is currently in a relationship with cricketer Virat Kohli" – see WP:CURRENTLY.

In the media

• "Kalpana Nair of Firstpost stated that" – italicize Firstpost as it is a news source.
• De-link Forbes Celebrity 100 as it does not link to India's Celebrity 100.
• "a list based on income and popularity across all of India's celebrities"

References

• Wiki-link and italicize Daily Bhaskar in ref 7. Also, it's "Dainik Bhaskar", not "Daily Bhaskar".
• Ref 15 – Glamsham is not a good source to use.
• Ref 17 – it is "The" New Indian Express.
• Ref 26 – it should be simply NDTV.
• Ref 40 – italicize International Business Times.
• Ref 46 – ditto.
• Ref 57 – wiki-link Forbes India.
• Ref 60 – wiki-link CNN-IBN.
• Ref 75 – The Times of India is a newspaper, so you know what to do.
• Ref 76, 77, 78 – they are all published by Forbes India, not Forbes. Also, de-link it in ref 76.
• Ref 80 – International Business Times should be in italics.
• Ref 87 – remove Bollywood Hungama News Network as it is not an author.
• Ref 89 – NDTV Movies → NDTV.
• Ref 91 – Pinkvilla is too gossipy to be considered reliable.
• Ref 92 – wiki-link Sify.
• Ref 95 – Indicine ain't a reliable source. -- Frankie _talk 10:20, 10 September 2015 (UTC)

I have resolved all your queries excpet for a few:- Her role in Dil dhadakne Do was of a special appearance, so I don't think writing something about a small role is necessary. I can't find a replacable reliable source for Pinkvilla and Indicine. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:26, 10 September 2015 (UTC)