Talk:Anna in the Tropics
Latest comment: 16 years ago by 68.38.192.122 in topic Clarity needed
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Clarity needed
editAre Marcela and Conchita the daughters? The article doesn't flow with clear writing. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.38.192.122 (talk) 04:13, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
Tone
editI'm just fixing a few small non-encyclopedic tone issues, such as "betrayal and family wafts through the factory like the blue smoke from a perfectly rolled cigar". BrickMcLargeHuge 03:12, 4 December 2007 (UTC)