Talk:Agrobank

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Chrisw80 in topic Requested edit

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Hi wikipedia team, My name is Aifa (Executive, Branding & promotions) and i'm an employee for Agrobank Malaysia. I would like to update some new changes About Agrobank Malaysia information:

Agrobank was formed in 1969 with a focus on financial services Malaysia's agricultural sector.[1] and [2]

Agrobank is government owned bank under the purview of the Minister of Finance Incorporated. The Bank’s financing of the agricultural sector is driven by a policy set forth by the Ministry of Agriculture and Agro-Based Industry (MOA). [3] and [4]

According to the Borneo Post, Agrobank provides financing solutions for agriculture; including upstream activities such as the supply of agricultural production inputs to downstream activities such as processing and selling of agricultural products to consumers.[5]

Agrobank has been operating for 46 years (as of 2016) and operates 188 branches across Malaysia. Agrobank's focus is on agricultural development.(http://www.newsarawaktribune.com/news/38924/Western-Union-Agrobank-team-up-to-bring-reliable-fast-payment-services/)

Aifa amalina (talk) 05:27, 5 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

For clarity: I have modified/refactored this edit request with the permission of User:Aifa amalina to make it less promotional and generally more encyclopedic. Chrisw80 (talk) 04:49, 5 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • Hello, and thank you for your proposed changes. Unfortunately, one of the sentences ("The bank's financing of the...") appears to be copied or closely paraphrased from Agrobank's website. Wikipedia is an open-source project: we are licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License, which permits our readers to reuse our text for whatever purpose they desire. As a result, copyrighted text for which we lack permission to reuse is incompatible with our free-license, and cannot be included in our articles except under extremely limited circumstances as detailed in the Non-free content policy. If you or your organization holds the copyright to your proposed text and is willing to release it under a free license, it is possible to grant Wikipedia permission for reuse by following the instructions at Wikipedia:Declaration of consent for all enquiries. But the preferred solution is to simply rewrite the text in your own words, which has the added benefit of maintaining a consistent editorial tone across Wikipedia's articles. Thanks, Altamel (talk) 01:11, 9 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
Hello Aifa amalina and Altamel, I have implemented some of the requested changes to the article, it is much improved at this point, I feel. Please take a look and let me know what you think. Chrisw80 (talk) 19:19, 9 April 2016 (UTC)Reply