Talk:Against All Odds (2008)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 19:47, 8 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • Before I pass this article, I noticed a few issues which could prevent it from being a GA. First, there are some grammar errors/typos:
  • "In Demand listed a preview regrading Against All Odds," - regrading ---> regarding
  • "who Roode verbally abused on the December 13, 2007 episode of Impact!." - I am not sure if you need a period on the end of that sentence, because there is already an exclamation point there.
  • "Voodoo Kin Mafia tag team partner Kip James inquiered on when" - inquiered ---> inquired
  • "Team 3D set up a table near the end, before Lethal sent both out of the ring and laid Devine over the table." - Change to this or something similar: "Near the end, Team 3D set up a table, before Lethal sent both out of the ring and laid Devine over the table."
  • In addition to the grammar errors/typos, there are a number of statements throughout the article that are lacking citations, they are:
  • "TNA released a poster featuring Abyss sometime prior to help promote the event."
  • "Against All Odds featured nine professional wrestling matches and two matches prior to the event that involved different wrestlers from pre-existing scripted feuds and storylines. Wrestlers portrayed villains, heroes, or less distinguishable characters in the scripted events that built tension and culminated into a wrestling match or series of matches"
  • "TNA promoted a Barbed Wire Massacre match between Abyss and Mesias at Against All Odds sometime after this."
  • "TNA promoted a match between Booker T and Robert Roode heading into Against All Odds."
    • I can include a card reference, but I don't got nothing on when exactly it was first promoted. I'd think this would be self-explanatory as the match happened at the event.
  • "TNA later promoted A.J. Styles and Tomko versus B.G. James and Bob Armstrong for the TNA World Tag Team Championship for the event."
  • Once all of these tasks have been fixed/addressed, I will be more than will to pass the article. But please, don't forget to write a message on my talk page if you have any questions or you finish, or I may forget about this review, since I am busy elsewhere on Wikipedia.--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 8 January 2012 (UTC)Reply