Talk:A Totally Fun Thing Bart Will Never Do Again/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:33, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Should twenty-third season be 23th season, as per WP:MOSNUM
- Lede: ""Enjoy It While You Can" was produced for the episode by Broadway composer Robert Lopez, who also co-wrote the song with the writers of The Simpsons". Huh? I don't really understand. Perhaps re-write that.
- What don't you understand? He produced the song, and also co-wrote it. Theleftorium (talk) 09:57, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "Around five million Americans tuned in to watch the episode during its original broadcast." Nielsen rating?
- I don't think that's important enough for the lead, and the lead already has two sentences from the first paragraph of the Release section. Theleftorium (talk) 09:57, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "When the rest of the Simpsons see how much Bart really wants the cruise, they each sell one valuable item to make enough money for the cruise tickets". I watched the episode; don't think Homer saw, so, IMO, its excluding Homer
- Plot: "The episode ends" - Repetitive
- Production: Link 2011–12 to those US TV schedules for 2011–12
- Production: Link New York, as per WP:MOS, which says that states/cities should be linked.
- References: How is ref. 5 a high-quality source for Wikipedia
- You don't consider Playbill to be a high-quality source? Theleftorium (talk) 09:57, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
- External links: Categories below should be sorted in alphabetical order
Great work! On hold for now. TBrandley 14:28, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing! Theleftorium (talk) 09:57, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
- No problem. This now looks good. Pass. TBrandley 15:04, 26 August 2012 (UTC)