Talk:A Good Man Goes to War/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Glimmer721 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:48, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "and serving as a mid-series finale" -> either "and served as a mid-series finale" or "serving as a mid-series finale"
- Prequel: "he hears a lot of rumours" Maybe its just me, but I don't like "a lot", maybe "many"
- I agree. Done. Glimmer721 talk 00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: "who has been watching over Amy during her pregnancy and taken her child" I would add 'has' before 'taken'
- Good catch. Fixed. Glimmer721 talk 00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- Production: Was the false ending ever reported or elaborated on?
- Not in anything I can find. The only slight elaboration besides "there was a false ending" was in Confidential where Kingston said that what River said in it was not true. Glimmer721 talk 00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- Filming and Effects: "These various sets..." -> "The various sets..."
- Reception: "positive to mixed reviews" I would do it the other way "mixed to positive reviews". Just a personal preference, no biggie
- References: Space needed between the "p." and the page number in Ref. 2 and 10
- I need to remember that. Done. Glimmer721 talk 00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- References: Link The Telegraph and The Guardian
Those are the only issues I could find. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:37, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- I believe I have fixed everything. Thanks for reviewing! (I'll nominate "The Walk" and "Oubliette" soon, though I don't think your contributions were minor enough so that you could review it) Glimmer721 talk 00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- Awesome everything looks good. I pass. As for The X-Files episodes, yeah, I think I might've been too involved. Maybe ask Grapple? He's a good reviewer.--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:35, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- I'm fine with just waiting until a reviewer comes along. Grapple is a little busy with "Squeeze". Glimmer721 talk 20:11, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
- Awesome everything looks good. I pass. As for The X-Files episodes, yeah, I think I might've been too involved. Maybe ask Grapple? He's a good reviewer.--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:35, 30 May 2012 (UTC)