Talk:689 Fifth Avenue/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Short description goes at the top.
• "Use mdy" goes below the hatnote.
• Remove the space between "mid- and".
• "After Rockefeller's death in 1922" → "After Rockefeller's died in 1922"
• "and granite water table" → "and a granite water table"
• Add a comma after "cornice with modillions".
• "At the third story" → "On the third story"
• "the lantern originally covered" → "the lantern was originally covered"
• "led to the second-floor rotunda and to the" → "led to the second-floor rotunda and the"
• "4th floor contained the organ salesrooms" - is "the" necessary?
• Wikilink Christopher Gray, Judy Lee Klemesrud, Enid Nemy, and Jon Caramanica.
• Sort categories in alphabetical order.
• Add alt text to every image being used.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Thanks. I have done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 00:36, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Oops, forgot to ping you. Epicgenius (talk) 01:18, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

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