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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 16:04, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
- Picture: Maybe add a little info about how Incanto was unfavorably compared to past villains of the week in order to give the pic a better rationale
- Intro: Link FBI
- Intro: I know it makes sense, but I would reword "The first episode of the series written by Vlaming, this also marked Steve Kiziak's first appearance as Duchovny's body double."
- Plot: Not a huge deal, but I would cite the guest stars and plot to remain consistent with our X-Files articles
- Plot: "but it has liquefied to leave only a skeleton." Change to "but it has liquefied, leaving to leave only a skeleton. "
- Plot: "Elsewhere, Mulder learns that the victim had met a man in a chatroom, and research his internet accounts." Change to "Elsewhere, Mulder learns that the victim had met a man in a chatroom, and he proceeds to research his internet accounts."
- Plot: "However, he has to escape whenever..." Change 'whenever' to when
- Plot: Remove space after 'James Handy'
- Production: ""2Shy" marked the début of Steve Kiziak as Duchovny's new body double, and while filming a scene in which their character, Mulder, bursts through a door, Kiziak and the other body doubles mistakenly burst through the wrong apartment's door, interrupting the tenant's dinner party." Break into two sentences
- Reception: The episode didn't get too many bad reviews, I'd reword the intro because you, at first, make it sounds as though critics slammed the series for repeating characters, but the critics only just compared the ones you mentioned.
That's all! On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:06, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to look at this one (probably my favourite of the season, actually. This or Paper Clip). I think I've addressed everything you've raised (diff), let me know if I've missed anything. GRAPPLE X 05:53, 12 March 2012 (UTC)