Talk:20th Regiment Royal Artillery

Latest comment: 5 years ago by J-Man11 in topic Some comments

Some comments

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After having a brief look at the article, as per J-Man11's request on his talk page, I think the article needs a rewrite for better flow. The History section for example could be split up into several paragraphs. There are other issues with style and consistency (especially with regards to the naming of the regiments). References should be provided for Notes a & b. But I think the main issue is with the writing. Regards, --Sp33dyphil (talk) 11:26, 1 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the comment, I’ll try to check this out today when I have the chance! J-Man11 (talk) 16:10, 1 March 2019 (UTC)Reply