Talk:2015 Pakistan tornado

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 116.213.32.71 in topic Natural Disaster (tornado)

Untitled edit

  • Article had only one sentence – checked it for plagiarism.

- The article’s original sentence had a reference to go with it, and the sentence was not taken directly from this reference. However, upon entering the sentence into Google, the sentence appeared on many sites, most likely due to the sentence’s vagueness, so I decided to rewrite the introduction to the article.

  • Added specific details to article about event

- I added more background information about the event to help build the article

  • Added additional citations to articles, from Wikipedia and external webpages

- After adding more specific details to the article, I credited them to their sources

  • Added a “External Links” section

- I added a section in the article to provide links with extra information about the event

  • Fixed "bare link"

- I kept the original article's source, but rewrote its entry in the reference section so that it would not appear as just a bare link

Ncollins129 (talk) 21:48, 25 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

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Natural Disaster (tornado) edit

Tornadoes 116.213.32.71 (talk) 11:57, 28 September 2022 (UTC)Reply