Talk:2015 6 Hours of Spa-Francorchamps/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Harrias in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 10:59, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Me again!
- Lead
- "record-braking" typo again.
- Qualifying
- "average time of 2:7.761" should be "2:07.761"
- "Gianmaria Bruni set the fastest class individual lap late in the session but was 0.070 seconds off the Aston Martin's pace.." I don't understand how it was the fastest, BUT slower than another car. Was that car in another class?
- Removed that certain fact
- Per MOS:ACCESS, don't just use bold text to indicate something; add a symbol too.
- Used the double digger symbol for identify the class pole sitters
- Race
- "..prompting the stewards to call him up to their office." He had to stop racing to go up to their office, or he went up when he was relieved, or after the race?
- "The No. 17 Porsche was issued with a 15-second, stop-and-go penalty.." Worth clarifying this was the Hartley incident above; it isn't immediately obvious.
- "record-braking" again.
- Per MOS:FLAG, accompany flags with country names.
- Again, don't just use bold to indicate a class winner.
Overall, again, a good piece of work, nicely done. Harrias talk 10:59, 8 November 2017 (UTC)