Talk:2010 Penang dragon boat tragedy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 21:35, 11 August 2020 (UTC)

GA Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

General

• Should be comprising of policemen... not comprising policemen

 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

• Should be or get clearance

 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

• Minor, okay if not changed: Don't have to mention parents name, can just say a parent of a deceased victim

 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

• • As well, I don't think inquired is the right word and can probably be cut out. There are also some more wording changes needed. Therefore, the sentence can read On 4 November 2010, a parent of a deceased victim revealed that the dragon boat training was unscheduled and conducted due to student requests to a new teacher already interested in joining the training session.

 Done Note that to be clear, it was revealed by the club to parent, not by parent. WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

• Teacher and student don't need to be linked.

 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

• Outdoor activities doesn't need to be linked.

 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

• Camping trip doesn't need to be linked.

 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)