Talk:2000 Spanish Grand Prix

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

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GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:2000 Spanish Grand Prix/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:31, 10 January 2016 (UTC)Reply


I'll be happy to take this review. This is the first time I've reviewed a Formula One article! JAGUAR  13:31, 10 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

Initial comments edit

  • "at the Circuit de Catalunya, Montmeló, Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain" - some overlinking here. Might be worth either de-linking 'Spain' or removing 'Catalonia'
    • Spain has been delinked
  • "Williams were third with twelve points" - was?
    • Corrected
  • "and BAR" - would it be worth writing out British American Racing (BAR) fully on the first time?
    • Yes I have done that
  • "The weather remained dry for the Saturday-morning practice sessions" - no need for the hyphen here
    • Removed hyphen
  • "Ralf Schumacher started the race in the spare Williams because his race car developed a sensor issue" - what does 'spare Williams' mean?
    • It means the spare Williams monocoque.
  • No dead links

This is a great article, both well written and comprehensive. I found very little issues to bring up. Once all of the above are clarified, you can have a GA!   JAGUAR  13:03, 11 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

@Jaguar: All the above issues have been dealt with. Z105space (talk) 14:04, 11 January 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for addressing them swiftly! This is good to go now.   JAGUAR  17:44, 11 January 2016 (UTC)Reply