Talk:2000 Mumbai landslide

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Daniel Ducote, Bgould4.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 13:03, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Revisions to Article edit

I have made the following revisions to this article as part of my student editing work:

-Rewrote plagiarism: "The landslide was the result of land erosion following heavy rains."

-Added sources 4 and 5 to give the article more credible references.

-Removed abundant source that was only used for plagiarized content.

-Added a scientific reference (5) on landslides, slums, and Mumbai from a peer-reviewed journal to give the article more scientific credibility.

-Added new information to the article from sources to make information clearer and more informative.

-Added link to Wikipedia article on Municipal Corporation Building to provide opportunity for further reading.

--Daniel Ducote (talk) 13:16, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Revised 11/24/15 edit

I made revisions to this article by correcting poor citations, clarifying information, and adding content. Bgould4 (talk) 08:35, 24 November 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]