Talk:1989 Football League Fourth Division play-off final/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 22:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
Shall review MWright96 (talk) 22:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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Lead
edit- Wikilink cross to the relevant article for non-Football readers
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Route to the final
edit- "Leyton Orient finished the regular 1988–89 season in sixth place in the Football League Fourth Division – the fourth tier of the English football league system – one place and four points ahead of Wrexham." - repetition of "place"
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- Darren Wright put the home side into the lead after two minutes when he scored from a free kick" - whose's free kick?
- Sources don't say. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Background
edit- "Both sides had won their away game in the matches between the sides during the regular season:" - repetition of "sides"
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Matches
edit- Just a note, is the one paragraph for both legs that really all the information that is available?
- Early days play-offs at this level of English football received scant coverage. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Second leg (summary)
edit- "and headed in a cross." - from who?
- The source mentions three players but doesn't make it clear which of them played the final ball in. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Post-match
edit- "Frank Clark, the winning manager said" - shouldn't there be another comma after the word "manager"?
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- Wiklink Heathrow Airport
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
References
edit- Reference 11 "Orient's revival on course" has the incorrect publication date
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Reference 12 "Orient up" is missing the page number- Is it? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
- MWright96 thanks, I've addressed and responded to your comments above. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 20:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- MWright96 thanks, I've addressed and responded to your comments above. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)