Talk:1987 FA Cup final/GA1
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 13:05, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
I'll take this one on, review incoming. Kosack (talk) 13:05, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Link kick-off.
Coventry City
edit- You're starting from scratch with links here really, so Coventry > Coventry City.
- Link FA Cup and Third Division.
- "managed at the time by future Coventry manager Phil Neal", is this worth noting? If he had taken over following the final perhaps I would agree, but he wouldn't do so for another six years?
- Link George Curtis and perhaps note his managerial role for context?
- "The game was once again played on a frozen pitch and Coventry won the game", double use of game is a little repetitive.
- "this time Second Division at Stoke City" > at Second Division...?
- Link Sheffield Wednesday. I'm guessing this will progress to FAC, so neutral venue may be worth linking as well.
Tottenham Hotspur
edit- Again, as the first mention outside the lead, Tottenham > Tottenham Hotspur.
- Link Fourth Division, may also be worth adding team or side afterwards to avoid a sea of blue.
- Link replay to Replay (sports).
- "beat fellow Division One", until now you've used the First Division, Second Division, etc format. I'd try to maintain the same style to avoid any confusion.
- Link Watford.
Background
edit- Link Highfield Road.
- Perhaps worth noting that the two singles were "commemorative songs for reaching the final" or something similar just to explain the relevance of them to people who may be unfamiliar to the tradition.
- Referee is linked here but is used in the Coventry Route to the Final section previously.
- Link captains.
- "in the starting elevn", typo.
First half
edit- Is there a need to bring Hotspur back here?
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:53, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- The infobox has hot conditions, but here mentions warm conditions. I'd class them as being a bit different so perhaps worth fine tuning?
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:53, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "was blocked by Peake who pass to Ogrizovic", should that be whose?
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:53, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "was lofted by Kilcline", add full name and link for Kilcline here as it's the first time he's been mentioned.
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:53, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- The article seems to vary uses of extra time and extra-time. Best to stick to one style.
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:53, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
Post-match
edit- First mention of Sillett outside the match details section. Worth including his full name and linking. Perhaps also list his position in the same way as Curtis also.
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:44, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "which, as of 2019, remains a club record", still so?
- Almost certainly, but the sources all seem to be 2019, I tried getting a BBC archive of the Spurs top scorers for last season but it kept redirecting back to the current page which isn't any use. Any thoughts? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:44, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Probably worth linking fanzine.
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:44, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
References
edit- Ref 4 uses 11v11.com while other uses all drop the .com. Not a major issue but probably worth lining up.
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:37, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Other than that, the refs seem very well formatted and a few random spot checks all come up good.
- Cool, thanks for checking. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:37, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
A very thorough and well written article. A few points above to look at, but nothing major. Placed on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 13:29, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Amakuru some food for thought here while homeschooling! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:33, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Kosack I think between me and Amakuru and some homsechooling, we're done. Cheers so much for the review. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:53, 12 January 2021 (UTC)