Talk:1986 Pacific hurricane season/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 20:31, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

• "which were issued four time a day at a " - Grammar error; "time" ---> "times"
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "Six other cyclones, entered the CPHC area of responsibility" - The comma is unnecessary
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "While located off the coast of Mexico, strengthened into Hurricane Celia at 1800 UTC June 27." - Sentence fragment; I recommend switching it to: "While located off the coast of Mexico, Celia strengthened into a hurricane at 1800 UTC June 27."
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "when it reached 25 °C (77 °F) waters" - Switch it to Fahrenheit first
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "northward over the U.S. States pf Arizona" - Typo
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "Satellite imagery began to show sings of" - Cool, the satellite imagery began to sing!
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "it manged to maintain marginal" - Typo
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "On Augst 30" - Typo
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "Javier weaken into a depression" - Grammar error; weaken ---> weakened
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "surfing event and Labor day Weekend." - Capital "d" on the word "day"
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "depression was embed in deep easterly flow." - Typo
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "minimal pressure of 984 mb." - Convert to inHg
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• Spell out the number 22 in the Hurricane Orlene section
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• Similar to the previous issue, spell out the number 23 in the Hurricane Paine section
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• "was declared Tropical Depression 21-E " - Spell out 21
  •  Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
• Find a citation for the 1986 PHS names
  •  Done
• Move two of the names to the third list, so then all of the lists will be even
  •  Done
• There is date inconsistency within the references (i.e. 2007-07-19 and February 4, 2011).
  • See below. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:28, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
• Who was the author of reference #2?
  •  Done
• Reference #3 has the wrong title, it should be: "The 1986 Central Pacific Tropical Cyclone Season"
  •  Done
• Reference #14 is missing the accessdate
  •  Done
• Add the specific dates for reference #18, 24, and 25.
  • Not a retirement for GA AFAIK. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:15, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately, due to the high number of issues (23), I have no other choice but to fail this article. After you fix the issues, you may consider re-nominating this article.--12george1 (talk) 20:31, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

Why did you fail it? I left your 1997 AHS on hold with the same number of issues, and the issues above were fixed within hours after the nomination.YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}

Any user is allowed to pass, fail, or put on hold at their discretion. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:35, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

It could always be renominated for GA, if the issues are resolved. Thegreatdr (talk) 20:19, 4 November 2011 (UTC)

Is there anything else need prior to sending it back to GAN? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}