Talk:1983–84 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 15:12, 22 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi Hurricanehink! I think it has been a while since I last reviewed one of your GANs. So I am gonna review this one today.--12george1 (talk) 15:12, 22 August 2013 (UTC)

• "the basin after it crossed from the Australian region, where it as named Annette. " - "as named"?
  • Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• "It tracked to the southwest, and the JTWC (JTWC) estimated peak 1 minute sustained" - Why is JTWC in parenthesis here? You already explained what it is earlier.
  • Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• "559 million Malagasy francs ($1.35 million 1994 USD)" - 1994 USD?
  • Oops, that's what I get for copying from Cyclone Geralda. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• "On December 19, the system intensified to moderate tropical storm status, prompting the Mauritius Meteorological Service to name it Bakoly. " Maybe you should say "Later that day" or something like that, because the previous sentence has the exact same beginning.
  • Ah, oops. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• "Passing within 100 km (62 mi) of Réunion, Bakoly produced" - Shouldn't this be rounded to 60 miles?
  • Stupid template. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• "Domoina developed on January 16 off the northeast coast of Madagascar." - Was there any known type of weather system that spawned Domoina?
  • There is, but do I need to include it? Domoina has a sub-article, I didn't feel the need to go into too much detail. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
    • Ok, I will let this issue slide.--12george1 (talk) 18:22, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• "MFR began tracking a tropical disturbance in the Mozambique channel near Juan de Nova Island." - I'm just noticing that you use the phrase "Mozambique channel" 4 times in the article. Two of them have a capital "C" in "channel", while the other have half a lower case "c". I don't really care which way you have it, but make sure all four either have a capital or lower case "C".
  • Decapitalized. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• That should be it, unless I find something later.--12george1 (talk) 15:12, 22 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks a lot! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
• I have found nothing else wrong with this article. So now I will be passing this article and listing it as a GA. :) --12george1 (talk) 18:22, 25 August 2013 (UTC)