Talk:(Don't Fear) The Reaper/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Bruce Campbell (talk · contribs) 04:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Bruce Campbell (talk) 04:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Lead

Billboard Hot 100 -> Billboard Hot 100
Done. Thanks for the quick review, by the way. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 14:35, 9 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
It was used in the 1978 film Halloween -> Change to something like "It has been featured in several films, most notably Halloween"
Reworded. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 14:47, 9 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Release and reception

"PopMatters's James Mann remarked that "(Don't Fear) The Reaper" was a "landmark, genre-defining masterpiece" of hard rock that was "as grand and emotional as American rock and roll ever got." " -> Please use reference 14 to reference this to as it's a direct quote.
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 14:47, 9 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

References

Only reference the firs instance of a link, no need to link to Allmusic or Rovi Corporation every time, that's overlinking.
Argh, done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 16:16, 9 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
There are nearly 40 references, try implementing 2 rows for the references.
Done.~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 16:21, 9 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
A few slight concerns and the article will be passed. Bruce Campbell (talk) 06:23, 9 August 2012 (UTC)Reply