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Edits made due to peacock terms and phrasing:
From: R&D's involvement in promoting conceptual Swedish design became notable when they created the graphic identity for Swedish Style Tokyo, an annual design fair in Tokyo.
To: R&D's involvement in promoting conceptual Swedish design became evident when they created the graphic identity for Swedish Style Tokyo, an annual design fair in Tokyo.
From: According to art critic Milou Allerholm, one of the revelatory narratives in the guidebook comes from Bonnevier’s queer reinterpretation of the timeless Leda and the Swan motif, transforming it into a tale of sisterhood and loss—not rape. The guidebook was noted for its unconventional approach and were proposed as mandatory reading among art historians.
To: According to art critic Milou Allerholm, “one of the revelatory narratives in the guidebook comes from Bonnevier’s queer reinterpretation of the timeless Leda and the Swan motif, transforming it into a tale of sisterhood and loss—not rape” and proposed it as mandatory reading among art historians.