User:Iazyges/Doug GA Rewrite Claims

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• Please bold any claims, and move any completed changed articles to section below, to indicate that you are willing to run an individual (in the sense of just that article) GAR for the article.

• William Buchanan (locomotive designer) (2022-09-05)
• George Henry Daniels (2022-08-30)
• Thomas Hall (inventor) (2022-08-25)
• William Phillips Hall (2022-08-24)
• Thomas Seavey Hall (2022-08-23)
• Daniel Davis Jr. (2022-08-21)
• Charles Grafton Page (2022-08-19)
• Benjamin D. Wood (2022-08-12)
• James L. Buie (2022-08-03)
• Thomas Hall (mechanic) (2022-08-03)
• John Ratcliff (bookbinder) (2022-07-03)
• Lambert Automobile Company (2022-07-02)
• Star Watch Case Company (2022-06-30)
• John Johnson (inventor) (2022-06-17)
• Alexander S. Wolcott (2022-06-14)
• Union Automobile Company (2022-06-12)
• William Goddard (publisher) (2022-06-10)
• Lambert Gas and Gasoline Engine Company (2022-06-07)
• Union (automobile) (2022-06-04)

  My first GA review. Fairly certain I checked everything and almost rewrote the article; will have another look shortly. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:21, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

• Joseph Nathan Kane (2022-05-05)
• Michigan Limestone and Chemical Company (2022-04-16)
• Wawatam Lighthouse (2022-03-14)
• SS Chief Wawatam (2022-03-04)
• Mary F. Hoyt (2022-02-26)
• Caroline Reboux (2022-02-18)
• Lambert (automobile) (2022-02-18)
• Manistee Watch Company (2022-02-04)
• SS Jacona (1918) (2022-01-28)
• Joseph Royle (2022-01-12)
• Isaac Collins (printer) (2022-01-10)
• William Bradford (printer, born 1663) (2022-01-09)
• John Holt (publisher) (2022-01-03)
• William E. Sawyer (2022-01-02)
• William Parks (publisher) (2022-01-02)
• Elizabeth Timothy (2021-12-19)
• Albert Kahn (architect) (2021-10-25)
• James Parker (publisher) (2021-10-21)
• Warren Antoine Cartier (2021-10-12)
• David Hall (printer) (2021-10-06)
• Mackinac College (2021-09-30)
• Jane Aitken (2021-09-21)
• Delos L. Filer (2021-09-21)
• William Hunter (publisher) (2021-09-17)
• Louis Timothee (2021-09-12)
• Antoine Ephrem Cartier (2021-09-08)
• Alexander Bain (inventor) (2021-09-08)
• Effie Maud Aldrich Morrison (2021-09-08)
• Charles F. Conrad (2021-09-06)
• William Hamlin (2021-09-05)
• Ruth M. Gardiner (2021-09-04)
• Alexander Purdie (publisher) (2021-09-04)
• Thomas Elfe (2021-09-02)
• Charles Mears (2021-09-02)
• John B. Curtis (2021-09-02)
• George Livermore (2021-09-02)
• Virginia Mae Brown (2021-09-02)
• Electro-Dynamic Light Company (2021-09-02)
• Joseph Dart (2021-08-21)
• Daniel Frank Gerber (2021-08-14)
• Albon Man (2021-07-29)
• John Caldwell (Michigan representative) (2021-07-26)
• Flat Top Manor (2021-07-19)
• Demarest Building (2021-07-18) - Let me see if I can take this one. Epicgenius (talk) 14:51, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
• Henry Fitz (2021-07-17)
• Linda Finch (2021-07-17)
• Moses H. Cone (2021-07-17)
• Royal Page Davidson (2021-07-11)
• Harlan Page Davidson (2021-07-11)
• Lilly Daché (2021-07-10)
• François Coignet (2021-07-10)
• Gottfried Schloemer (2021-07-08)
• Amasa Holcomb (2021-07-07)
• Josiah Holbrook (2021-07-07)
• Thornwell Jacobs (2021-07-07)
• Cone sisters (2021-07-05)
• Archibald Spencer (2021-07-05)
• Charles A. Cheever (2021-07-05)
• Alec Sutherland (2021-07-04)
• Austin Cornelius Dunham (2021-07-02)
• Juliana R. Force (2021-07-01)
• John Mason Loomis (2021-06-25)
• Charles Corydon Hall (2021-06-18)
• Gertrude Hull (2021-06-11)
• Thaddeus Fairbanks (2021-05-25)
• W. Wallace Kellett (2021-05-25)
• Carl Breer (2021-05-19)
• Anthony Harkness (2021-05-17)
• Frederick Morrell Zeder (2021-05-06)
• Sidney Howe Short (2021-05-04)
• Charles Townsend Ludington (2021-05-04)
• Giovanni Caselli (2021-04-28)

• Burr Caswell (2021-03-29)
• Daniel Cragin Mill (2021-03-29)
• Nels Johnson (2021-03-27)
• House of Flavors (2021-03-26)
• Crypt of Civilization (2021-03-22)
• Mary E. Clarke (2021-03-19)
• Charles Dinsmoor (2021-03-17)
• Benjamin Loxley (2021-03-16)
• Owen Ray Skelton (2021-03-14)
• Benjamin Loxley house (2021-03-14)
• Abraham Lincoln's patent (2021-03-13)
• Robert Grace (2021-03-12)
• Moses Bensinger (2021-03-11)

• Schuyler Wheeler (2021-03-07)
• Justus Smith Stearns (2021-03-07)
• Marianne Means (2021-03-05)
• George Edward Hilt (2021-03-04)
• Alexander Bonner Latta (2021-02-24)
• Lewis Ludington (2021-01-13)
• John Stuart Skinner (2021-01-04)
• Eleonora de Cisneros (2020-12-23)
• Jacob Earl Fickel (2020-12-09)
• Elizabeth Plankinton (2020-11-16)
• Ludington family (2020-11-12)
• Merkel Landis (2020-11-03)
• William Austin Burt (2020-11-02)
• Marvin Pipkin (2020-11-01)
• SweeTango (2020-10-31)
• Michigan logging wheels (2020-10-31)
• Birdsill Holly (2020-10-29)
• William Beanes (2020-10-29)
• John Ward Westcott (2020-10-29)
• Richard Henry Park (2020-10-28)
• Robert Logan (naval architect) (2020-10-27)
• Frank Fowler Loomis (2020-10-23)
• Thomas Johnston (engraver) (2020-10-23)
• George Huebner (2020-10-20)
• George W. Hotchkiss (2020-10-19)

  In my original review I did a reasonable amount of checking of the sources he used and questioned why they were all so old. I found some newer sources and a good amount of new material was added. I did not notice any copvyio issues but was not explicitly looking for them. Wasted Time R (talk) 23:12, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

• Ludington Public Library (2020-10-19)

  See article talk, not good. Rewritten to address some copyright issues, but no indication that all offline sources have bbeen checked. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:49, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

• William L. Mercereau (2020-10-17)
• Automatic scorer (2020-10-15)

  In my original review I did extensive checking of both the sources he used and more recent sources I found that he should have been using. As a result, some inflated claims in the article were removed and a good deal of new material was added. I did not notice any copvyio issues but was not explicitly looking for them. Wasted Time R (talk) 23:12, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

• Mary Myers (2020-10-11)
• Nelson Ludington (2020-10-10)

  Mostly failed verification, see article talk. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 20:53, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

• Persis Foster Eames Albee (2020-10-10)
• Charles T. Pepper (2020-10-09)
• John Jonathon Pratt (2020-10-08)
• Albert P. Halfhill (2020-10-07)
• William Rath (2020-10-06)

  In my original review I did extensive checking of the sources, and as a result parts of the article were reorganized and several mistakes or confusions were corrected. I did not notice any copvyio issues but was not explicitly looking for them. Wasted Time R (talk) 23:12, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

• George F. Lewis (2020-10-06)
• Eli Parsons Royce (2020-10-06)
• William Plankinton Mansion (2020-10-05)
• Mary Florence Potts (2020-10-04)
• John Dwight (manufacturer) (2020-10-04)
• Joseph Hobson (2020-10-03)
• John Plankinton (2020-10-03)
• Elizabeth Plankinton House (2020-10-03)
• Cellarette (2020-10-02)
• William Plankinton (2020-10-02)
• Typographer (typewriter) (2020-10-01)

  I was able to check against one source (the National Cyclopædia) and remove some copyvio, but there may be more. XOR'easter (talk) 19:41, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

• Mario Peruzzi (2020-09-20)
• Westinghouse Time Capsules (2020-09-16)
• 1836 U.S. Patent Office fire (2020-09-15)
• William A. Starrett (2020-09-13)
• Burt's solar compass (2020-08-30)
• Austin Church (2020-08-24)
• Frederick Langenheim (2020-08-23)
• Statue of John Plankinton (2020-08-22)
• Holly Steam Combination Company (2020-08-22)
• Edwin S. Votey (2020-07-21)
• Stanhope Medal (2020-07-09)
• Joseph Ray Watkins (2020-06-27)
• 1877 U.S. Patent Office fire (2020-06-20)
• McLean House (Appomattox, Virginia) (2020-06-14)
• Henry L. Haskell (2020-06-10)
• Benson raft (2020-06-09)
• Jeremiah Dwyer (2020-06-09)
• Eureka Iron & Steel Works (2020-06-06)
• Clover Hill Tavern (2020-06-04)
• Old Appomattox Court House (2020-06-01) - I may be able to fix this one. Looks fairly straightforward. Will send through individual GAR when I'm done regardless. Hog Farm _Talk 16:26, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
• Penny Penates (2020-05-30)
• Archibald Cary Smith (2020-05-27)
• Wilhelm Victor Alfred Tepe (2020-05-25)
• Whitcomb L. Judson (2020-05-24)
• George Crowninshield Jr. (2020-05-24)
• SS Pere Marquette (2020-05-22)
• Music House Museum (2020-05-22)
• The Queen's Messenger (2020-05-22)
• William R. Farrand (2020-05-16)
• George Edward Pendray (2020-05-12)
• Oliver B. Shallenberger (2020-05-12)
• Eugenia Tucker Fitzgerald (2020-05-11)
• Eliot Indian Bible (2020-05-09)
• Prospect House (Hamilton County, New York) (2020-05-07)
• Haskell Manufacturing Company (2020-05-01)
• St. Edward's Catholic Church (2020-04-30)
• Corbett's electrostatic machine (2020-04-29)
• Ralph Waldo Trine (2020-04-23)
• Yampa (yacht) (2020-04-20)
• Pere Marquette Lumber Company (2020-04-19)
• Jakob Nacken (2020-04-18)
• Meteor III (2020-04-16)
• Birth of public radio broadcasting (2020-04-15)
• Michigan Stove Company (2020-04-14)
• World's Largest Stove (2020-04-12)
• Detroit News Orchestra (2020-04-11)
• George Harrison Barbour (2020-04-09)
• Farrand & Votey Organ Company (2020-04-08)
• Raymond W. Bliss (2020-03-09)
• Wistarburg Glass Works (2018-02-10)
• Haskelite Manufacturing Corporation (2018-02-10)
• Carrom Company (2018-01-21)
• James Ludington (2018-01-21)

  See article talk, not good. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:34, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

• White Pine Village (2018-01-01)
• Electric fire engine (2017-09-24)
• Experiments and Observations on Electricity (2017-06-05)
• Franklin's electrostatic machine (2017-02-06)
• Tiny Town (miniature park) (2017-01-11)
• Dresden Codex (2017-01-04)
• Army and Navy Union of the United States of America (2016-10-19)
• Hammer Historical Collection of Incandescent Electric Lamps (2016-10-08)
• Dean Smith (pilot) (2016-09-07)
• Carl Edgar Myers (2016-03-11)
• Conclusion of the American Civil War (2009-03-08)

Fixed

• Paul Rapsey Hodge (2021-03-31) (Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)
• Buckeye gasoline buggy (2021-03-30) (Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)
• * John William Lambert (2021-03-29) (Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)
• George A. Mitchell (2021-03-27) (Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)
• Thomas Jefferson Ramsdell (2021-03-27) (Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)
• The Three Musketeers (Studebaker engineers) (2021-03-27) (Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)
• Clam Lake Canal (2021-03-25)(Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)
• Eber Brock Ward (2021-03-08) (Sources checked and article rewritten by jp×g during original review)

Cleaned, but still needs GAR

• Appomattox Court House National Historical Park (2020-05-30) Checked or rewritten everything. Some failed verification remains that I didn't have time to track down. Listed at GAR due to remaining failed verification and some comprehensiveness issues. Hog Farm _Talk 02:19, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.