Talk:Lemon Tree (2008 film)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman 05:38, 30 November 2009 (UTC) Overall the article's pretty good. I just have one issue:

• The end of the plot if a little confusing. No conclusion is really noted; if the film ended inconclusively it should be written as such, if there's an ending put it in. In general, I don't feel that the plot section near the end gives a clean walkthrough of the movie.

I'll put this on hold despite the article writer retiring because I feel that this is quite close to passing and is a very nice article. It just needs some fine-tuning. Wizardman 05:38, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

The ending is cleared up now, so i'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman 17:11, 5 December 2009 (UTC)

Trees were not cut down

My improvements to this article were deemed unconstructive, however, the article as it now stands is inaccurate. The lemon trees were not cut down in the end, they were only pruned (and only some of them, actually), if to a ridiculously low height. The juxtaposition of the tiny trees with the towering separation wall sends a message of absurdity rather than despair. The article as it now stands does not represent the film correctly. If you don't like how I tried to fix it, then please use the fact that the trees were not cut down to fix it yourself. Thanks. 173.73.41.198 (talk) 14:38, 21 December 2009 (UTC)

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