Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/July 18, 2024

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• Pinging @JennyOz; RP made some edits and I did a partial revert, but I'm sure you've got a firmer grasp on the issues here than I do. - Dank (push to talk) 23:58, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Hi both, it reads well enough to me, ie, nothing jumps out that might be reported at Errors. (I'm still beside myself with connection outage and having to use alternative online opportunities. I have a firm grasp on nothing!)

The Mercury program itself isn't linked but would that be overkill? Mercury Seven is the group article and Friendship 7 mission links to the Mercury-Atlas 6 flight.

Perhaps at "the only person to fly in both the Mercury and Space Shuttle programs." we could pipe a link at "Mercury" to Project Mercury

ie "both the Mercury and Space Shuttle programs."

Is that any better or have I lost the plot? JennyOz (talk) 13:53, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Sorry to hear about your connection problems, let me know when it gets sorted! - Dank (push to talk) 14:06, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Happy to add the link ... changed it to "both Project Mercury and the Space Shuttle program". Does that work for both of you? - Dank (push to talk) 16:19, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Elegant solution, thanks Dank. JennyOz (talk) 01:10, 15 July 2024 (UTC)