Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Gabriel Fauré/archive1

Resolved comments from Crisco 1492

"According to the biographer Jean-Michel Nectoux," - Is "the" necessary?

It is indeed necessary in good UK English. The construction "according to biographer J-M Nectoux" is deprecated by British style guides and is relegated to tabloid newspapers. See for example Guardian style book under "Names": "Do not leave out the definite article in such constructions as 'style guru David Marsh said ...' It should be 'The style guru David Marsh'" Tim riley (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

"His mother was the daughter of a minor member of the nobility." - Perhaps this should be before the marriage?

I'll see if I can move it seamlessly. It's a good point. Tim riley (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

"Fauré was a founder member of the Société Nationale de Musique" - Is "founder member" proper BrE? I'm used to seeing it as "founding member"

"founder member" is usual, but I don't object to "founding member", and have changed it. Tim riley (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

"Appointed in his place and with the support of the French government, Fauré changed radically the administration and curriculum." - Changed radically or radically changed? I'm pretty sure that, if there's an object, the adverb should be before the verb.

You're quite right. (What can I have been thinking of?) I have amended forthwith. Tim riley (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

"I've started a Quartet for strings, without piano. This is a genre which Beethoven in particular made famous, and causes all those who are not Beethoven to be terrified of it." - Emphasis in original?

Yes, according to Jones. Tim riley (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

"Fauré died in Paris from pneumonia on 4 November 1924 at the age of 79. He was given a state funeral at the Église de la Madeleine and is buried in the Passy Cemetery in Paris." - Reference? Why not merge with the below paragraph?

Reference added. I think I'd rather keep the two paras separate as they deal with distinctly different matters. Tim riley (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

• That's it. Stellar prose. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:13, 5 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Thank you for those points, all very much ad rem. Tim riley (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2012 (UTC)