Wikipedia talk:Co-op/Rich Farmbrough

Request advise for a new user

Dear Rich Farmbrough I am new to wikipedia and i am so intrested to write and edit articles, i need your advice on my article Navid Faridi, i dont get what is wrong with my articles as every editor writes a different comment for me. Every time i correct the things one editor said, another editor writes another comment so i am mixed up now. I added reliable sources and did my best for inline citation but i dont know how to improve my adticle. Please advise, best regards Shams pasargad 2000 (talk) 14:55, 10 January 2017 (UTC)