Wikipedia:WikiProject U.S. Roads/Assessment/A-Class review/Interstate 80 Business (West Wendover, Nevada – Wendover, Utah)/archive1

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the proposal was Not promoted. Stale for 7 days. --Rschen7754 (T C) 06:32, 26 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Interstate 80 Business (West Wendover, NV – Wendover, UT) (0 net support votes)

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Interstate 80 Business (West Wendover, NV – Wendover, UT) (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs) review

Suggestion: Promote to A-Class
Nominator's comments: Looking for an A-class Interstate BL and another Utah (and Nevada) A-Class.
Nominated by: Admrboltz (talk) 03:13, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Perhaps just lop off the major junction of Alt US-93 in the infobox; it's already listed in the terminus, so perhaps for the sake of redundancy you should remove it. Also, maybe change abbreviating Alt US-93 from "US-93 Alt." to "US-93A". What do you think of this? —Preceding unsigned comment added by CountyLemonade (talkcontribs) 03:55, 10 October 2008
    • Why should we change the abbreviation? The correct abbreviation is US 93 Alt accd to NDOT, but I have a dash in there right now to keep it consistent with the rest of the article. I left 93 Alt in the major junctions as, well it is a junction, with BL-80, just cause it continues along with I-80 doesn't mean its not a junction. --Admrboltz (talk) 04:00, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      • Eh, I guess just because I prefer it better. US-93A looks better to me than US-93 Alt., but we are Wikipedia so if NDOT uses this abbreviation then we should too :) CL04:08, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments

These are real quick comments, I'll give a more thorough review as soon as I can.

OK, here's the more thorough review I promised.

  • Part of the Nevada section is cosigned as U.S. Route 93 Alternate (US-93 Alt), and was formerly Nevada State Route 224 while the entirety of the route in Utah is cosigned as Utah State Route 58 (SR-58). This sentence either needs additional punctuation or be broken into two.
  • The time zone boundary at the state line should be mentioned in prose.
  • The bolded terms at the state line entry of the major intersections table should be de-linked. If somebody hasn't figured out what Nevada and Utah are by this point in the article, there's trouble in paradise, and again the time zone should be mentioned in prose. =-)
  • It's a good article if that's the most dirt I can pick out, congrats =-) Dave (talk) 01:22, 11 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support - Issues resolved to my satafaction. for the record I would still prefer SR-58 an an alternate shield, not a junction, but it's not that big of deal.Dave (talk) 04:19, 16 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Oppose - a few issues, most minor, but a few major...
    • Lead - what departments of transportation?
    • You use cosigned 3 times in 2 sentences.
    • Blvd = Boulevard
    • RD - ex- should probably not be used.
    • How are you sourcing the locations of the businesses?
    • However comma to access...
    • You suddenly switch to mentioning SR 58 in the second half of the RD. That is a bit confusing.
    • History is hard to follow - maybe I'm just tired but it is hard to connect how SR 58 relates with the rest of it. Of course, one could look at the lead again, but that's a pain.
    • You mention SR 224 in the lead, and it is never mentioned in the history.
    • Please consider combining the Google Maps cites.
    • Not that I necessarily agree with this, but an advisory that a FAC reviewer could criticize sourcing using photographs as OR. Just a warning. --Rschen7754 (T C) 09:25, 17 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.