Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/USS Mercy (AH-4)

USS Mercy (AH-4)

I would like to see what areas need to be worked on to get this to A-class. Also, is there enough substance to think about FA-class? — Bellhalla (talk) 23:21, 15 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

If the incomplete USS Illinois (BB-65) can get to FA-class then this surely can too, its just an issue of getting all your ducks in a row. I'll take a look after dinner and offer suggestions for improvement then. TomStar81 (Talk) 01:52, 16 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin

Quite nice, overall; but a few things that might be improved:

The single sub-sections aren't really the best thing to have.
The listing of notable passengers might work better in a box of some sort, rather than as a rump section.
The image with the footnotes essentially turns it into a three-column layout, which is somewhat cramped on smaller resolutions.

Kirill ^(prof) 01:51, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Responses, in order:

Easily removed. (see item below, also)
I can easily prose-ify the notable passengers (and eliminate the section heading in the process)
Good point. I'll remove an image so that doesn't happen.

Thanks for taking time to do all the reviews that you do, Kirill. — Bellhalla (talk) 14:59, 5 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]