Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Russian battleship Sevastopol (1895)

OK, here goes. I put this up for a wiki-wide review yesterday, then remembered that MilHist has a PR system. Sevastopol is a Russian battleship. I've nurutred this article from red link to GA, and would like to see it go further. Buggie111 (talk) 17:34, 28 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Australian Rupert

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Sorry, not much from me with this review (I made a couple of minor tweaks):

  • the Advisor script reports that the ISBN for the Spector work might be incorrect. Can you please check this?
  • are there years for the Balakin and Taras works?
  • I found the date on the introduction in Taras, although I don't know it's for the entire book (December 31, 1999). Nothing on Taras. Buggie111 (talk) 01:18, 4 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • could OCLC numbers be added for the Balakin, Taras and Wood works? Worldcat might have this information;
  • could a location be added for the publisher of the Taras work?
    • Nope. None in the book or on the web where I looked. Buggie111 (talk) 01:18, 4 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • in the References section, Gardiner should appear before Halpern (alphabetical order);
  • in the Notes section, if you replace "<references group="Note"/>" with "{{reflist|group=Note}}" it will present the footnote in the same sized font as the Citations.

AustralianRupert (talk) 04:44, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]