Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Peter Lumsden
This is the first military history article that I have ever created, so please forgive me if there are loads of things about it that could be improved. This biography of General Sir Peter Lumsden was recently rated B-class, and I'm interested to see how else could be expanded and if it could potentially reach GA standard. I think I've exhausted most of my sources on Sir Peter, although there may well be others. I welcome any advice and comments from the project on how it could be improved. Thanks very much. A Thousand Doors (talk) 00:16, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
XavierGreen
edit- You will need at least one citation in the second paragraph of the military career section. For G-Class every paragraph of the body and conclusion of the article should have citations. The only section which does not generally need citations is the lead as it summerizes material which has already been cited in the body of the article.XavierGreen (talk) 02:04, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
Done
- It might be a good idea to add to the infobox a Battles/wars section, as many higher class biographical military articles have that section in the infobox. For example the Bhutan War and any other conflicts he participated in would be included there.XavierGreen (talk) 02:07, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
- Done
- It would also be helpful to the readers if isbn numbers were added to the refs section, for older works without isbns OCLC numbers can be added instead.XavierGreen (talk) 02:09, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
- Done (sort of) I've added all the ISBNs that I can find for the refs cited, but I'm afraid that I'm not familiar with the OCLC.
- Thanks a lot for reviewing this article Xavier, your feedback's been very helpful. A Thousand Doors (talk) 02:00, 15 December 2010 (UTC)