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Operation Lam Son 719

Have been working on this stub and am looking for some constructive criticism. Am also looking for some images depicting ARVN forces operating in Laos (since U.S. military photographers were forbidden to accompany the incursion) any help would be appreciated. RM Gillespie 18:00, 28 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kyriakos

Overall I think it a good article but I have some comments:

Firstly I think the article can use some more citations seeing as some paragraphs have none.

Second, I know from recent experience the first-level headings are not permitted in articles. So I suggest that you down grade them.

Apart from that I think the article is good and good luck with your future work on the article. Kyriakos 21:57, 1 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Canpark

I've read the article thoroughly and I think the author covered the events very well. Like Kyriakos said, more citation is needed but apart from that everything is in good order. Once again I' very impressed and deeply appreciate itCanpark 05:20, 4 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin

A very nice article, as usual. A few points to look at:

The use of acronyms may be too dense. Is it actually necessary to refer to the forces involved as "ARVN" and "PAVN" all the time, or can we get away with talking about "North Vietnamese" and "South Vietnamese" troops instead? Ditto for "AAA".
There are a few empty footnotes that need to be fixed.

Kirill Lokshin 16:45, 11 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]