Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Military history of the United States during World War II

Military history of the United States during World War II edit

Well something is wrong with the Peer review tag, so I'm just adding it here. I'm adding this request because I started this article but I don't have a whole lot of time on my hands, and I would really like someone to come along and improve on my writing and add alot of the stuff I haven't gotten to yet. Rmt2m 18:12, 10 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks.Rmt2m 19:26, 10 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Miborovsky edit

Looks good at first glance. A few points I feel are noteworthy:

I would like to see something about Roosevelt's evading the Neutrality Acts to send aid to China in 1937. Not strictly WW2, but still related.
The Pacific Theater and European Theatre are not the only ones America was involved in. I would like to see something about the CBI (China-Burma-India) Theatres. There's a wealth of stuff: the American Volunteer Group, Merrill's Marauders, X Force, Y Force, etc.
I think this article should be more than the sum of its parts, ie. not just a collection of summaries of the longer main articles. While the individual battle articles talk about the battles and tactics, this page, perhaps, should talk about the grand strategy...

Keep up the good work. -- Миборовский ^{U|T|C|M|E|Chugoku Banzai!} 02:48, 11 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Rmt2m edit

Would it be better for the article to be organized into years instead of theaters of operation? Rmt2m 15:49, 11 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Up to you, I suppose. -- Миборовский ^{U|T|C|M|E|Chugoku Banzai!} 02:45, 13 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]