Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Keith Arbuthnott, 15th Viscount of Arbuthnott
I have added dates and facts in non-Wikified form. I would appreciate guidance re format of this 21st century General. Maybe a military info box is appropriate. If you would give me a steer, I will do the donkey work. Kittybrewster 21:31, 7 May 2006 (UTC)
Not a bad start. The obvious thing to do would be to turn the service and promotion history sections into full sentences; that alone will probably increase the length of the article substantially. Also, wikification—and removing abbreviations—will make the article much easier to understand for the general reader.
The material does look fairly solid, though. Is there any more detail on his personal life available? Or was he pretty much a purely military man? Kirill Lokshin 11:22, 9 May 2006 (UTC)