Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Arado Ar E.381/Archive1

Arado Ar E.381 edit

I think this article is now ready for peer review, since I have taken it to B-class, and am wishing to be able to make content additions and edit the prose and I would like other editors to help me. AirplanePro^Radio_Checklist 00:18, 30 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nick-D edit

This is a very interesting article. My suggestions for further development are:

"In the end of the war" is a bit vague - can you provide an approximate date?

Completed Do you think it's all right now?

The article could do with a copy edit

Completed listed with the requests page at WP:GOCE

It would be interesting if the article discussed how it was intended to employ the aircraft in combat, and the feasibility of these plans - am I right in thinking that it was to be launched as a stand-off weapon from other aircraft? (which of course means that it was highly vulnerable to these carrier aircraft being attacked)
Similarly, the article should identify why the project was cancelled (presumably as it proved impractical). Nick-D (talk) 01:58, 1 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Completed

Buckshot06 edit

There needs to be some description of the test flights and how they went; test pilots; problems/changes/solutions, and if possible some of the connected politicking. Buckshot06 (talk) 10:08, 5 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I don't have sources. WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist 01:19, 7 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Also much much more detail about how and why the project was cancelled; what were the resources diverted to? Buckshot06 (talk) 10:10, 5 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Same here. WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist 01:19, 7 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]