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Military brat (U.S. subculture)

I nominated this article for FAC about two weeks ago. Two people (Outriggr and SandyGeorgia) made some really good recommendations on the talk page and I realized some problems with the article that I decided I wanted to address, so I voluntarily withdrew the nomination. It probably would have passed if I left it on the FAC indefinately, but that isn't my style I wanted to get it right. One of the big changes was the decision to follow the Military Peer reviews recommendation and change the focus to be explicitly on U.S. Brats. Feel free to copy edit (or edit in general)... also, let me know any places where the prose is weak or needs to be improved (or feel free to fix on your own).

Withdrawn FAC and Previous Military Peer Review Balloonman 10:04, 14 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I already made my suggestions. Support. --ScreaminEagle 17:58, 14 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Copied ScreaminEagle's comments to article talkpage. [1] Very good detailed nitpicky suggestions... to which I am very appreciative. Balloonman 18:30, 14 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
SupportWandalstouring 20:28, 14 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Support, comprehensive.ALR 08:41, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]