Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/List of Knight's Cross of the Iron Cross recipients (Schu–Sz)

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List of Knight's Cross of the Iron Cross recipients (Schu–Sz) edit

Nominator(s): MisterBee1966 (talk)

I am nominating this article for A-Class review because all the lists are finally complete. Reviewers please consider reviewing the "Sa–Schr" list as well. These two lists now complete the entire series. Due to size, I tried to split the list in two parts of equal size. ~~The best way to achieve this was by extracting all those whose last name starts with "Sch", thus creating a list "S'" (note the apostrophe denoting a derivative of the letter S).~~ Reviewers may feel that a different name is more appropriate, or that different split all together would also achieve the objective. I am open to suggestions. Thanks again to all of you who have helped bring this series to this state. MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:34, 13 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: FWIW, I read over the article per ~~new standard disclaimer~~ copyediting disclaimer, and found nothing to fix in the text. - Dank (push to talk) 03:22, 15 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

~~Comments~~Support by Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:51, 15 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This is my tenth review of lists in this series, and all of the comments I have made during those reviews have already been addressed in this list.
Werner Schrauth and Schubert? don't have citations for their ranks.
- Thanks for catching this. done MisterBee1966 (talk) 03:34, 17 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Same for their dates of award.
- Thanks for catching this. done MisterBee1966 (talk) 03:34, 17 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Schwanbeck doesn't have a citation for date of award.
- Thanks for catching this. done MisterBee1966 (talk) 03:34, 17 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
all toolserver checks are green (no action needed)
I am very impressed with the commitment and dedication you have shown in completing this series. I am sure thousands of hours have gone into it, you should be very proud of what you have achieved. Well done, supporting. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 05:13, 17 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks, the bulk of my 7+ years here have gone into this project MisterBee1966 (talk) 06:51, 17 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support: I made some tweaks to the notes; please check that you are happy with these. Cheers, AustralianRupert (talk) 22:56, 27 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Is there anything I can do to further improve the article? MisterBee1966 (talk) 16:15, 9 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Gerhard Schaar is more commonly known as "Gerd". Since "Gerd" is short for "Gerhard", someone down the line might have thought it wise to use the extended version. But in my experience, the Bulletin des Presse- und Informationsamtes der Bundesregierung is seldom wrong on names of ambassadors [1]
- Hm, Fellgiebel, and Scherzer use the name Gerhard. I will check what Busch and Röll say. I am inclined to put the discrepancy in a footnote. MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  - Busch and Röll also list him as Gerhard. I suggest that the name issue is first addressed in his article. Until this question is resolved, I suggest to keep him listed as Gerhard. MisterBee1966 (talk) 07:39, 11 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Eberhard Schäfer: "kingly Hungarian" or rather "Royal Hungarian"?
- done, in other list now MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Gerhard Scheibe: "(radio/wireless)" should have included "operator"?
- done, in other list now MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Wilhelm Schlüter, Karl Schümers, and Hans-Christian Schulze: Schupo should link to "Schupo (Nazi Germany)" rather than the present-day police formation.
- done, in other list now MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Oberwachtmeister has its own article know and can be linked.
- done, in both lists MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
German National Archives are officially known as "German Federal Archives"
- done, in both lists MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Hans-Joachim Schulz-Merkel: "battalion surgeon" might be a better translation of "Truppenarzt"
- done MisterBee1966 (talk) 09:50, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Wilhelm Schuncke: AOK = Armee-Oberkommando?
- done MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Kurt Schwarm: "Krad-Melder" would be a "dispatch rider"
- done MisterBee1966 (talk) 09:50, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Heinz Schweizer: "W" stands for "Waffenoffizier"?
- Fellgiebel states "Feuerwerker" (pyrotechnician), added note MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

ÄDA - DÄP VA (talk) 18:06, 9 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Based on the comments made by Dank, I regrouped the recipients into two list "Sa–Schr" and "Schu–Sz". Some of the comments made by ÄDA - DÄP VA are therefor no longer applicable to this list. MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:12, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support ~~Comment~~

Schweitzer is not listed in either issues of "von Seemen" What do you mean by this? Editions? And why the quotation marks around his name? You don't use them when referencing him elsewhere.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:39, 17 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry for the delay. I reworded the section. MisterBee1966 (talk) 17:47, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  - It's better, but the word "issues" is confusing. Do you mean editions?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:03, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    - Please check again. It should be clear now. MisterBee1966 (talk) 05:19, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
      - Works for me.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:51, 12 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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