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Self-nom. Recently passed GA, had a productive peer review which appears to have quieted down. This is my first real attempt at a detailed officer biography. JRP03:14, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support. I think it's a good article ready for A status. Needs more detail about his childhood/adolescence and his post-Navy life and the red links should have stub articles created for them, but, good enough for "A". Cla6804:19, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support Add pre- and post navy life section(even if they are not notable parts of the biography) and get one of our copyeditors to improve the writing style before nominating it for FA. Wandalstouring12:48, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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